You are going away to travel for the summer.
A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.
Say where you are going
Describe your house
Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house
Dear Ron,
Hope you are doing well.
I'll soon be traveling to Florida for a summer vacation. Meanwhile, I assume you'll be the right person to look after my house while I'm away for a month.
It's been a long time that you've visited my place. Hence, let me elaborate that it is located on London street and the house number is 14. Also, there are few utilities like stove, iron and refrigerator in the house which will be useful for you during your stay.
Moreover, I'll expect you to take care of some fragile things that would require your utmost attention. I've a small garden at my backyard which has to be watered daily. Furthermore, my dog needs to be fed on time as well as he has to be taken for walks at dawn.
I hope it is not a burden for you. I look forward to seeing your positive response.
Best regards,
Jonathan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ear Ron, Hope you are doing well. Ill soon be traveling to Florida for a summ...
^^^
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... a summer vacation. Meanwhile, I assume youll be the right person to look after my ho...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ght person to look after my house while Im away for a month. Its been a long ...
^^
Line 8, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
... a month. Its been a long time that youve visited my place. Hence, let me elabora...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... for you during your stay. Moreover, Ill expect you to take care of some fragile...
^^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... would require your utmost attention. Ive a small garden at my backyard which has...
^^^
Line 12, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eeds to fed on time as well as he has to be taken for walks at dawn. I hope it...
^^^
Line 15, column 8, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... be taken for walks at dawn. I hope its not a burden for you. I look forward to...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, look, moreover, so, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49350649351 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25421028091 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701298701299 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3812579288 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.6666666667 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338956893062 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10345652693 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828630330569 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135760444426 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087207810504 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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