You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
say where and when the class will be held
give reasons why you think your friend might be interested
suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Jill,
I want to let you know about this great opportunity for us to learn more about Indonesian cooking.
Our local college has advertised that they are going to introduce a 10 week course on Indonesian cooking. Classes will be held twice a week (Tuesday and Thursday), starting at 6 pm and running for 8 weeks. The first class starts next week and all classes are held at the college, which is just so convenient for us both!
I remember that when we went to Jakarta last year you raved about the food, so I know you’ll be interested in going to these classes. Just imagine what it would be like, being able to cook our own Indonesian meals. There will also be guest chefs from some of Sydney’s top Indonesian restaurants. I can hardly wait! How about you?
Let’s meet to discuss this idea. How about getting together on Friday for dinner? Let me know if you’re free and I’ll make a booking for 7 pm. Indonesian of course!
Love
Jenny
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69942196532 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5724556653 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693641618497 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.763583815 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9090909091 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196573675061 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678449883979 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594986247399 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10850478192 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075789065514 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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