Dear Ms. Kelly,
I hope you are doing well and keeping safe. I’m writing this letter to tell you that I’ll be away this week and really be grateful if you could look after my condo for a few days.
Recently, my mom fell ill, and owing to her previous diagnosis she hasn’t been in a good condition even though I have arranged for a visiting nurse. I understand that visiting her could positively affect her condition, and hence I’ve decided to make a trip.
While I am away, there are a few things I would request you to look after and they are the money plant, the refrigerator, and the thermostat. There isn’t a lot to do regarding the fridge and thermostat except monitor their temperature settings while my money plant may require some attention as it constantly needs to be watered.
On the whole, I would love for you to take care of my house while being away for a couple of days and would appreciate the gesture.
Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, really, regarding, so, well, while, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46054880789 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0878103057 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322059152895 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14818164937 0.0766984524023 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127011149777 0.0603063233224 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166537814943 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120364469236 0.0580467560999 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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