Dear Jones,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am surprised that it's been three years since we met, and I still vividly remember the moments we had at my home during your 12th grade summer vacation. With all our reminiscence and eagerness, I am planning for a trip to Canada by the end of April, and I expect spending some quality time with you.
As I am yet to explore your nation, I have planned to stay there for 20 days and I wish you and your family doesn't mind if I can accommodate myself at your place. Also, during my stay, I would like to visit some offbeat places like Spotted Lake and Pinawa as I am not keen on tourist traps. Hence, I would be grateful if you can prepare an itinerary with such unconventional places for my trip.
Since the plan is on April, I believe you too would be on your vacation, and I would be glad if you can join me to make the trip boisterous. Kindly advise on the type of clothing and medicines I need to carry on my trip.
I eagerly look forward for your response and excited to meet you soon.
With Warm Regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... 20 days and I wish you and your family doesnt mind if I can accommodate myself at you...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24757281553 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31176547057 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3255998306 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275725239174 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10971937607 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807383284291 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176674880857 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121493868361 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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