You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter:
explain the reason for the party
give the date and time of the party
suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Dear John,
Firstly, thank you for all your help on my assignments, I have been bombarded with assignments by our teacher and your help is greatly appreciated. Anyways, I was planning a surprise birthday party for Manoj. Let me describe the details to you.
Manoj, our classmate, has been feeling really low as he was unable to attend his parent’s 25th anniversary back home because of our final exams. On top of that, he is also feeling drowsy due to antibiotics which he has been taking for his fever. Hopefully, this surprise party will bring back a smile on his face. Manoj's birthday is on 23rd August and I have booked Ravenclaw, the school coffee shop, for the event. I forgot to mention that Ajay, Vijay and Ramesh have already agreed to attend the party. They already ordered the cake and if you are planning to attend, could you please get the special candle, which is sold near your house?
I hope you will be able to make it. Manoj will be over the moon to see you at the party. You are one of his best friends, so your attendance would definitely make a difference. I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Regards,
Nitin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, first, firstly, if, really, so, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64390243902 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4702874423 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6865574991 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2307692308 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232770077215 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781194381025 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457266878624 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1617134959 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218007214727 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.