Dear James,
I hope you and your family doing ok. I am writing to inform you that I have been stuck on an impossible situation and due to that I have to cancel my visit to England on upcoming month.
My current employer has planned a worldwide event on knowledge sharing of different ongoing construction projects between all the branch offices in India through Video Conferencing. I am supposed to lead my team on behalf of our Mumbai Branch.
Due to this I have to reschedule my England trip. I am really sorry for this and I assure you I will make up for this next time I see you.
I will clear my schedule for next month in advance with my employer and then we will plan for my visit if it is ok with you. Let me know if you are available for next month. I will Wait for your favourable reply.
Yours Truly,
Brendon
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28025477707 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42894896922 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3707256251 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182877310203 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804854079578 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437291450897 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109040525776 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601425470622 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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