Respected Sir/Madam,
I am an undergraduate in art's department of your esteem college, with roll number 45673. I borrowed two books "The three live's " and "Silent Monk" on the 22nd of August, as for the preparation of finals and 22nd of September is the submission date. The purpose of penning this note is to show my apologies for being not able to submit the books within time limits.
Unfortunately, my uncle got a heart attack on last Monday and in critical condition. Concerning this, I and my guardians will be travelling to visit him and to take care of him for a while. As my uncle lives alone in M.P., the rest of the family lives in This could take more than a week, as he is in I.C.U. for now.
I know late submission bear some fine with it, but as my conditions are inevitable, I am requesting an exemption from it.
Your faithful,
Rich
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in M.P., the rest of the family lives in This could take more than a week, as he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62420382166 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79585187363 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7903996152 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0720960797755 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315945371245 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183364355667 0.0603063233224 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.031798478799 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257339360385 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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