You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly You called the customer service to report the problem you have not yet received any help Write a letter to the company and in your letter 1 Introduce yourself2 E

Dear Sir,

I am writing to complain about the inoperative Sony TV product that I purchased from XYZ showroom on 26 July 2019.

I am Sita Bhardwaj, who is a prominent customer of your company, stays in Bangalore. Recently, I purchased a Sony TV, version 2.3, black color, and 36 inches long that cost me around Rs.50,000.

It all started, when I reached home and tried to switch on the TV, to the great disappointment, it did not start. Afterward, I called the local technician to start it, but that effort also went into vain and I came to know that I received a malfunction TV set.

Then, I tried to register the complaint through your service call center. My complaint number is 768798798. Unfortunately, they also did not extend their help and kept doing false promises to exchange it with a new one. Now, It has been more than one week, no serviceman has visited me to replace the defective TV.

I would like to request you to take immediate action on it and exchange the faulty TV with a new one at the earliest. Again, If I receive no action on the issue within two days, then I would have to escalate it to the higher management of the company.

Hoping, you understand the grievance of the customer and would accelerate the process.

Yours Sincerely,
JKKL

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Average: 9.2 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the inope...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...company, stays in Bangalore. Recently, I purchased a Sony TV, version 2.3, black ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67543859649 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70556805345 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3432869014 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191615907378 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580541470261 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464840784615 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861028333222 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050923112508 0.0580467560999 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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