Dear HR,
Concerning the job offer letter, it was difficult to decide between the offer and the current job, based on several factors elected to pursue with my current job. Therefore, regretful to decline your offer. However, extremely thankful for the proposal and opportunity to function for your prestigious institution.
To elucidate, recently promoted for the increment in the salary and other allowances, for example, utility bills, medical, transportation and accommodation. In addition to this, your company resides outside the suburbs of the town consumes excessive time travelling here and forth. Comparatively, my company located nearest to my residence and does not require to spend unnecessary time for travelling. Most Importantly, dealing with clients locally and internationally increases my experience and communication abilities.
Currently, leading a team of twenty working on an important project demands hard work and consistency to complete successfully. However, there are few of many reasons to resume with my current job.
Expectedly, looking forward to acknowledgement at earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
John Moses
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 362, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...st to my residence and does not require to spend unnecessary time for travelling. Most I...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96987951807 4.54256449028 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26899798116 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710843373494 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.41237113402 135% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0058223045 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111582633709 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414729594939 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445659375773 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549115088942 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510299532821 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 70.7449484536 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.75 8.71597938144 192% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 7.59969072165 140% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.