You couldn't find a book you need to read in your local area shops. Write a letter to shop owner in another town to enquire about the book. Include the following: 1) Give the details of book you need 2) Why you need it? 3) How will you pay for it?

Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you this letter to check availability of a book which is hard to find.

I have been searching for a book titled as Linux Engineering by Harry Watson and visited near book store in Yakkala. As for the store owner above book is not in their stock and not sure when it will be. Further, he gave me your store address to check from you.

Moreover, I am currently following an expert degree in Linux and this book contains most of the subject matters in it which is directly related to my degree. Not only that but also it is really useful as a day to day resource where I work right now.

Furthermore, Please let me know the price of this book and date when I could collect it from your store. Once I am at your store, I could pay for it by cash if necessary or could transfer money to your bank account as well.

I hope to hear positive news from you at earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Thulasya

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ity of a book which is hard to find. I have been searching for a book titled a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, well, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27717391304 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27175863316 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603260869565 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2418414872 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5454545455 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268329547285 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106665460624 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730989262924 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151064700701 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963885988042 0.0580467560999 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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