Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a loyal customer of your outstanding restaurant where I have been eating my lunch since 2018. I have profound admiration for your food and high-quality service but recently I was frustrated about the transformation has undergone.
Let me elaborate on my concern. I always derive a lot of pleasure from your way to maintain quality of service and extraordinary food that most likely stirs clients’ imagination. However, the interior that was created only deteriorates the relaxed atmosphere of your cozy restaurant.
I honestly believe it would be better to change the color of the walls. Taking into consideration the main concept of your restaurant, the yellow colour does not suit it altogether. Please do consider my advice because I appreciate being your customer. Unfortunately, I can stay in your restaurant for no more than 5 minutes due to the crazy colour that triggers headaches.
I hope you will bear in mind that pastel colours or neutral ones are by far more suitable rather than bright yellow.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Ms. Pr.
- Air travel is responsible for a lot of pollution in the environment Some people think that prices of air plane tickets the should be increased in order to reduce Air Traffic Do you agree or disagree 89
- Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly Others value quality of work above appearance Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in cinema Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- After finishing school some students go travelling or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university Do you think the advantages of gap years outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Due to science and technology people around the world are living similar lifestyle Do you think it is a positive or negative development 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and consideration. Yours faithfully, Ms. Pr.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13186813187 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05067295567 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.725274725275 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5926304871 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19931234988 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663542813977 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518438825624 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11429296606 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555281885862 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.