You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

Dear Sir,

I recently visited Hotel Ivy, located in Downtown, Minneapolis. I am writing to share my unforgettable experience and describe the delicious lunch I had at the restaurant.

I vividly remember that I visited the hotel on Black Friday, specifically on November 13th along with my family. I was really excited about the number of choices that they offered for lunch. I ordered chicken Biryani along with Raita. It is my favorite dish. It was very tasty and well-cooked. Moreover, it was garnished very well and tempting. In addition to lunch, they have several varieties of desserts to choose from as well. We chose Mexican Sweet Grill and it was lip-smacking as well.

I would definitely recommend the hotel to anyone, especially those who are looking to dine outside on special occasions. I would rate it a five on five. The location of the restaurant and the lively atmosphere can make anyone's day brighter. Furthermore, they arrange a concert every day. I would definitely give a thumbs up to this restaurant and especially appreciate the wide variety of dishes that they offer at an affordable price!

I hope that I have given some valuable information that could help people who are on the lookout for some great restaurants.

Yours faithfully,

Jane Doe.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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...of choices that they offered for lunch. I ordered chicken Biryani along with Rait...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a thumb' or simply 'thumbs'?
Suggestion: a thumb; thumbs
...cert every day. I would definitely give a thumbs up to this restaurant and especially ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04694835681 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86887114621 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.1025327291 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1875 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3125 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873675412871 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241505067661 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351891976536 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471357302173 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371725107374 0.0580467560999 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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