Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in connection with the invitation received to me in regard to an interview for a placement to study Masters in Marketing at Wilson College. As per the invitation, I am required to be present on 16th September at 11.30 am, however, I am afraid to say I may not be able to make it at the expected time because of a previous appointment.
I have been working as a Marketing Executive at Social Kinnect for the past 8 months wherein I assist the Marketing Head in various media events as well as attend webinars on behalf of him. Unfortunately, I have an important webinar to attend at the same time as the interview is scheduled.
I am extremely apologetic for not being able to attend the interview, but I can manage to come later on the same day or else some other day. Kindly let me know if that is possible.
In addition to that, I would also like to know the duration of the interview and whether there would be any tests during it so that I can prepare myself accordingly.
Thank you for the invitation. I will look forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Kreena Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 51, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...for the invitation. I will look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Kreen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, in addition, as well as, i am afraid, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51941747573 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76656869553 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8210296239 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 4.34317383033 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248661070962 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938797804216 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590672849555 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111297494393 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581200319533 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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