Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this latter in response of your invite, I have received from your institute on my e-mail to convey the speech about my country At an American college. However, I am so glad that you have chosen me for this unforgettable opportunity.
Besides, I am accepting the call from your organisation and asking you to please let me know the preferable dates and timings so, I would make myself available on the particular day because I have to travel abroad to attend an International conference on 15th of December.
Moreover, I will prepare a speech about my nation. Plus, in the auditorium I would need the mic and projector to show some slide as well as I do include regarding my culture, history, governmental benefits along with different places that one must explore in their lifetime.
At last, I would say that I am keen to address my province also do not forget to share me the dates and time. If you have further queries, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Thanking you,
Yours sincerely,
Isabell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir/madam, I am writing this latter in respons...
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...ou have chosen me for this unforgettable opportunity. Besides, I am accepti...
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...or this unforgettable opportunity. Besides, I am accepting the call from yo...
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...ular day because I have to travel abroad to attend an International conference on...
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...one must explore in their lifetime. At last, I would say that I am keen to a...
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...anking you, Yours sincerely, Isabell
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81215469613 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78324753401 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.000666918 44.8134815571 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 4.34317383033 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247802126833 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105457328358 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695607425625 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105217994505 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869036345833 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.