You have been living in an apartment for the last three years. A few problems have emerged in your apartment since the last repair.
Write a letter to your landlord.
In your letter,
give details of the last repair work
what the problems are now
how you would like the landlord to solve these problems
Dear Mr.Andrew,
I am writing to you to report about the water dripping from the ceiling. It is extremely annoying precisely while I try to catch some sleep at night. I would like you to send maintenance guy to repair it at the earliest.
Recently, up on the complaint to change centralized air conditioner machine because of some noise in it. Thereafter, one it goes, another it comes. In other words, noise from the chill air blower stopped, water drip started. Because of liquid falling sound, it takes my peace of mind away at late evenings. Thus, it panics me about electric short-circuit problem that may even lead to fire widespread. It is therefore important not only to arrest water leakage from it but also ensure there is no other issues. Please send the service engineer on this weekend or after 7 PM tomorrow. If it is not fixed at the earliest then I ought to have to search for another accommodation.
Thank you so much for your prompt action on it.
Your faithfully,
Yusa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Andrew
Dear Mr.Andrew, I am writing to you to report about...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... action on it. Your faithfully, Yusa
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73714285714 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65664511467 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.162908638 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.7692307692 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124922971985 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437854350692 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551900726215 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961351838787 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482882181581 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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