Dear William
I know you usually do not hear from me, but this time I want to draw your attention towards the new member who has recently shifted to my adjacent room.
The word 'badly annoyed' would understate my discomfort which is caused by my neighbor for the past few weekends. He plays loud music for the whole night, with some friends singing along which irritates me a lot as I prefer to read or sleep during night silently. The noise produced does not let me me focus on my work and consequently I am not able to wake up fresh the next morning. Not only this, but also I am unable to attend my morning online yoga sessions because sometimes the party lasts long till 6:00 am.
I would like to request you to make that person understand that the noise at night which they create can harm other's health and can be debilitating. If they want to do party, they can do it in the apartment's hall which is huge and far way from the rooms. Well and good if he understands this, otherwise kindly plan to shift him to some other apartment of yours where neighbors are comfortable with the noise and does not have any major issues with it.
Hope you will ponder this problem and take an action at the earliest.
Thanks,
Sanya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear William I know you usually do not hear from me, but this time I want to dr...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: me
...lently. The noise produced does not let me me focus on my work and consequently I am ...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'apartments'' or 'apartment's'?
Suggestion: apartments'; apartment's
...want to do party, they can do it in the apartments hall which is huge and far way from the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4298245614 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26206964179 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688596491228 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0233617778 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150176810482 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526330177483 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379219375839 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906653036468 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02489543715 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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