You have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it. Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision.- Tell the manager about your decision and the reason for it- Describe what you have learnt in your current job- And ask the manage

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You have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it. Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision.
- Tell the manager about your decision and the reason for it
- Describe what you have learnt in your current job
- And ask the manager to write a reference letter to help you with future employment

Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform you of my decision to leave the Smith's Company after my contract come to an end next month.

After my three years working in this company I think it is time for me to broaden my horizons and experience new working environment in which I have the chance to learn a variety of modern technologies related to my work. I like to travel more as part of my new job as well.

I have learnt an incredible amount during the years of working in this company. Not only the key software programs that are related to my job, but also some valuable interpersonal skills such as group work and delegate tasks. In addition, working in such an innovative team motivated me to think up new strategies in order to boost my efficiency.

It would be extremely grateful if you can provide me with a letter of reference for the future employers.

Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...lated to my work. I like to travel more as part of my new job as well. I have l...
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Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yers. Yours sincerely, Rahi Honarvar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i think, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59509202454 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63353875333 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5382750902 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126708584247 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064115398706 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500103637265 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687517492799 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283197601607 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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