You have a friend who is about to enter university, and he/she wants you to advise him/her on which subject to specialize in – history, in which he is very interested, or computer science, which offers better job prospects.
Write a response letter to this friend.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? I hope you are having a joyous time. I received a letter from you yesterday as realised that you are in a dilemma of which subject to choose for specialisation. I am writing this letter to give you my advice.
I am very happy an excited to know that you have completed your higher education and are ready to start your college life. I am sure you will learn a lot of things and will enable to develop skills and expertise required to build a successful career.
In my opinion, I would suggest you to opt for the subject as per your interest and not according to the one which has more job prospects. If you are more interested in history then opt that subject as you will be able to pay more attention and study properly. I am sure that after studying history you will be able to get a good a prosperous job and excel in your field.
I wish you all the best for your future and may you have an affluent future.
Take care and all the best.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h subject to choose for specialisation. I am writing this letter to give you my a...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g this letter to give you my advice. I am very happy an excited to know that y...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d are ready to start your college life. I am sure you will learn a lot of things ...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the best. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30208333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36508805186 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2566629421 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226864723735 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892352892299 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630242280554 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118749867786 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816294489261 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.