Dear Sir,
I am an ardent follower of your highly acclaimed newspaper The Times of India because of the authenticity and hard work present in your journals. Recently, a news article was there in the 3rd page of the paper about 3 BHK apartments being constructed in the children's park near my locality. I was shocked to see the news and read the whole article that the project is being undertaken by the Reliance Housing Group which is one of the biggest construction companies.
They have detailed about the design in the article being a 20 storey building with all the flats constructed with the latest design, very spacious and gracious from inside. I think this project should be checked properly because the children's park is one of the most beautiful places in our locality because of the luscious green grass and many kinds of rides and machines for people's enjoyment. even for jogging it is quite huge.
I think the park should not be changed into apartment site as it will cause harm to the environment and people will loose the enjoyment of their pupils happiness and even their health will be affected because of the construction.
Thanking You
Yours Faithfully
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 397, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...des and machines for peoples enjoyment. even for jogging it is quite huge. I think ...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...harm to the environment and people will loose the enjoyment of their pupils happiness...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84236453202 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58412771219 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630541871921 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9561246425 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.875 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170426215126 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791536122592 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827253699196 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769613715988 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402734084819 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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