you have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect
Write a letter to the Editor of the magazine. in your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam
I am a resident of Kedarnath, Uttarakhand who read your article about Kedarnath in your latest magazine.
To initiate, I would like to thank you for considering writing about this fascinating place in your article. However, the information provided in it is quite old and incorrect to an extent. The flood which came few years back has vanished the roads but now they have been re-constructed and made suitable for tourists. Additionally, the hotels are now operational and people are granted to visit the temple of the city.
Articles of your reputed magazine covers a large audience of the world and is very impactful. Therefore, providing correct information becomes your core responsibility. The article written can affect tourism of this place tremendously.
I would request you to ponder this situation and publish a new article in your upcoming month magazine. If required, I can send you the latest information about my city. This place is fully dependent on tourists for its economy and wrong or partial details about it can be detrimental for the economical structure of the town.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ils about it can be detrimental for the economical structure of the town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13114754098 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94359569088 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1755845695 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3636363636 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298553656744 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104538862097 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584940944187 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175581550032 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341258718571 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.