You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 1em; text-align: justify; font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12.8px; white-space: normal;">Dear Sir / Madam,</p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 1em; text-align: justify; font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12.8px; white-space: normal;">I am writing in connection with a missing or stolen debit card from your bank. This is an urgent matter as the bank card could prove dangerous in the hands of the wrong person.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 1em; text-align: justify; font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12.8px; white-space: normal;">Just yesterday, I received a letter from your bank's head office. It stated that my new bank card was enclosed and asked me to acknowledge receipt. However, when the envelope arrived in my mailbox, it was in a tattered state. More importantly, the debit card which was supposed to be included was missing. I checked and rechecked around the mailbox, but found nothing. I am concerned that someone has gone through my mail and possibly stolen the card.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 1em; text-align: justify; font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12.8px; white-space: normal;">For this reason, I request that you cancel the existing debit card immediately. The debit card in question is related to my account number 64729401 at your Bay and Bloor branch. After it has been cancelled, please arrange to send me a new one, as I need to travel overseas next week and will need to carry the new bank card with me.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 1em; text-align: justify; font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12.8px; white-space: normal;">Thank you kindly in advance.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 1em; text-align: justify; font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12.8px; white-space: normal;">Yours faithfully,</p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 1em; text-align: justify; font-family: Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12.8px; white-space: normal;">Ms Brenda Holster</p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 937.175257732 213% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.63122923588 4.54256449028 146% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.72554493852 2.54303337028 186% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458471760797 0.622605031667 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 290.88556701 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 226.906245935 44.8134815571 506% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.777777778 76.5299724578 290% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 16.8248392259 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0712081664156 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439222011762 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343782040832 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712081664156 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 8.37731958763 316% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 70.7449484536 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 7.45979381443 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 21.77 8.71597938144 250% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 8.62886597938 365% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.