You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my Visa card issued by your bank last evening. I have already contacted the customer care department yesterday to block my card immediately.

I was shopping with my family at Hougang Shopping Centre. Apparently, I have used my card multiple times at different stores yesterday. Firstly, I visited Popular store to pick up a few assessment books then later shopped at Cotton-On, the clothing store. However, I did not leave my card at any of the stores above. Finally, we all dined at Pastamania, an Italian restaurant where I used my card for the last time. Upon reaching home, I realised that my card was missing. I might have dropped it somewhere and hence immediately contacted your bank to notify about my loss.

Appreciate if you could please look into this matter on priority and issue me a replacement card as soon as possible because I use my card extensively and seldom make cash transactions. Pease feel free to contact me should you need any further clarifications or information about my lost card.

Looking forward for your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,
Nur Amirah

Votes
Average: 9.5 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erday to block my card immediately. I was shopping with my family at Hougang ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93401015228 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77411051407 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685279187817 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6359170092 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7692307692 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313780064326 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116134656089 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106307764895 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207945109283 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12720427711 0.0580467560999 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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