You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to companyComplaining about thisGiving your reasonsAsking for bill to be changed

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a premium and satisfied customer of your postpaid service. However, I am writing to complain about the irrelevant call charges added to my phone bill for the month of January 2019. My monthly rental is Rs. 450 including taxes but this bill amount was Rs. 3500. After looking at the call summary, I identified that the rise in the amount is due to the addition of charges for international calling.

This was extremely annoying to me as I do not have any relatives or official contacts in abroad to whom I could connect through my mobile. Additionally, I do not remember lending my phone to anyone for them to make such calls. More specifically, the timestamp of these calls are in the evening during which I am usually training at the gymnasium. Ideally, the phone would be in my personal locker at the gymnasium so by no means I could have made these calls.

I am really disappointed and would request your team to rectify the errors as well as send me the updated bill. I will be looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Thank you.

Yours sincerely,
Prasad

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... means I could have made these calls. I am really disappointed and would reque...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6345177665 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63232110136 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634517766497 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6662289892 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29692853546 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989436025042 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654726009621 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179765143353 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632123676739 0.0580467560999 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.