Hello James,
Hope this letter finds you in good spirits. I'm very delighted to move to a new house and its own house. I'm writing this letter to let you know about my new house and take this opportunity to invite for a dinner.
To start with, in the previous house I stayed with my family wasn't suited to live in. It had a plethora of problems and the owner of the house did not respond to my requests for amending the house. On the top of that, the owner has increased the rent by 30 percentage. The ordeal did not end here, it was far away from my office so it was always a hectic day for me to reach home or office through congested traffic. These are some of the adding factors to make up mind to buy a house. I am glad I have bought it before the fall of this year.
I love to tell you about my new home. Let me elaborate on it. Its a three bedroom house with two attached bathrooms. It has an open area in front of the house where I planted small plants and converted into a garden. My house is surrounded by a boundary wall and the total house is of 250 sq.yards. I have always opted for an individual house rather than flat.
Anyways, I love if you can make yourself free next Sunday and visit my new house along with your family. I really appreciate your presence.
Looking forward to seeing on the next Sunday at my house.
Thanks,
John.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19011406844 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18657297167 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4436011814 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2222222222 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227153950573 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639903681587 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545330474233 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125272721625 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753877313179 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.