Dear Ram,
I am doing great and hope you are also sailing in the same boat. I am writing this letter to tell you about my shifting to a new residence last week.
As you know, my last accommodation was on rent and it has been over a year that I was living there. While renewing the lease, my owner announced the sudden rise in the rental which was almost the double and became very difficult to live there, so, after discussion with my family, they helped me in buying a flat.
The new apartment is located in the posh area with a lot of amenities such as indoor pool, gymnasium, club house etc. The neighbors are very cordial and they also invited me over the dinner as I do not have a gas connection and applied the same on my behalf. Although, I do not have any acquaintances here but with their assistance, i made good connections in my building and everyone here is very helpful and jovial.
I am organising a house-warming party next Saturday and the invitations have sent to all of our friends and I also want to you join us. Please spare a few extra days, as, there is a lot to catch up, since our last meeting.
I am looking forward to see you soon.
Yours truly,
Rupali Mahajan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...neighbors are very cordial and they also invited me over the dinner as I do not ...
^^
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey also invited me over the dinner as I do not have a gas connection and applied...
^^
Line 7, column 336, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ntances here but with their assistance, i made good connections in my building an...
^
Line 12, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...last meeting. I am looking forward to see you soon. Yours truly, Rupali M...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45679305168 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0871884766 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181367509808 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720435781376 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541071827465 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990994547525 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450716512017 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.