Dear Sandy,
I hope you are in pink of your health and best of spirits. I am writing to tell you that I have moved into a new house yesterday with my family. Let me describe it a little.
It is quite spacious as it covers an area of about 1500 square feet. It is two-story building with five bedrooms each with attached washroom, a living room, a kitchen, a garden at the back of it, courtyard on its front and a small garage. It is fully furnished. The best thing about this house is that it is near to your residential place due t which I or you will not need to travel a long distance to meet and spend quality time with each other.
Another thing which made me feel relaxed about it is that the houses in this area are completely occupied by the residents from our country India. I have also communicated with them several times and felt very much comfortable. it is a very good place to move in. I am inviting you to visit me at my new home as soon as possible because I want to make you explore its each corner and chit-chat with each other since there is a lot of stuff I want to tell you about.
Pay my regards to your family.
Yours faithfully
Ankita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sandy, I hope you are in pink of your health an...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rtyard on its front and a small garage. It is fully furnished. The best thing abou...
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...l times and felt very much comfortable. it is a very good place to move in. I am i...
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Line 4, column 365, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ible because I want to make you explore its each corner and chit-chat with each oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16371681416 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29489093314 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6694153579 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3846153846 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252177234744 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088405640285 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712148256625 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163103354601 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774502028933 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.