Dear Mr Peter,
I am writing this letter with regard to the handover of the workplace, which has been under your custody for the last five years. Throughout this lease contract, we never had any issues related to the conduct of your employees and our company’s assets, like workstations, desktops, and other facilities provided to your staff.
However, I am very disappointed to draw your attention to some of the missing assets, like four CUP's and ten headphones. Apart from that, we have observed that most of the chairs used by the employees are broken from their movable wheels. Furthermore, by looking at the workstations, I can assure you that these were in much better conditions when handed over to your organization five years back.
I have enclosed a list of all the missing and damaged property and its market value. I would request a face to face meeting so that we can end this lease contract with mutual understanding of my loss, and I expect your company to compensate for the forfeit. I hope we will be able to continue this 5 years long relationship with your company after the end of this lease.
I hope to hear back from you with the date of your availability for a face to face meeting.
Kind Regards
Parker Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... disappointed to draw your attention to some of the missing assets, like four CUPs and ten ...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er to your organization five years back. I have enclosed a list of all the missin...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... company to compensate for the forfeit. I hope we will be able to continue this 5...
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Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our company after the end of this lease. I hope to hear back from you with the da...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ompany after the end of this lease. I hope to hear back from you with the dat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, so, apart from, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76605504587 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67725301319 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2999562597 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.875 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192134032187 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741650093425 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473548280358 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112616085039 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199073089902 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.