Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Anna Steels, I am writing in regards to the advertisement for a nanny for your child that you posted in Australian times last week.
I would really like to take this opportunity to baby sit your kid, as being a new immigrant, I am already looking for a job, and I think this fits me perfect. Being a professional caregiver, with an experience of 2 years in geriatrics and 3 years of experience at one of the best day care center in my country also adds an advantage to it.
I am really good with kids and have enough patience to understand and talk with them. Also, I can help the kid with her homework and other study related things. As, I will be staying with you I do not mind to run some home errands for you when needed.
Being new to the country, I would really like to spend my free time exploring the city and knowing local culture of this beautiful country. I would really appreciate, if you give me this opportunity, and I assure you I will do my best.
Waiting for your positive reply.
Thank you
Yours Sincerely,
Ana Steels
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
..., My name is Anna Steels, I am writing in regards to the advertisement for a nanny for your ...
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Line 6, column 202, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind running'.
Suggestion: mind running
...As, I will be staying with you I do not mind to run some home errands for you when needed. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5565406314 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4648326109 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291841694855 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111863312736 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556543075548 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151387051292 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379649486056 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.