Dear sir,
I have encountered a series of problems since I lived with another student in the same room. I am writing this letter to ask if you would be generous as to reassign to me a different room.
My roommate and I study the same course in the college. However, we have had a dispute recently since our lifestyles are completely different. I am more likely to study in a silent environment. Unfortunately, my roommate usually invites strangers to participate in parties in the room, which consequently generates numerous unbearable noises that interfere with my sleep and study. In addition, I am dreadfully affected by the din of the traffic, as my room is close to a busy road. As a consequence, I find it extremely difficult to concentrate on my work.
In the light of such facts, I would like you to arrange another place for me to settle in alone, as I am unwilling to share the room with others. Furthermore, the accommodation should also be far from busy roads.
I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. If you require further information, you can contact me by email.
Yours sincerely,
David.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 198 250
No. of Characters: 896 1200
No. of Different Words: 124 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.751 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.525 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.905 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.945 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.655 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.126 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ormation, you can contact me by email. Yours sincerely, David.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01591280171 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0038243273 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6923076923 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304649812153 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868212978161 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733326000569 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187581589791 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715981353091 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.