You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
Describe the situation
Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Mr Harris,
I hope this letter finds you well. my name is Chi Chung. A master student whom is occumodating at Suny Flower department. As last term I had to share my room with another bachelor student, it really makes serious problems for me.
Let me explain you in details.this student always bring another colleague to our room which is small. they always are awake until the midnight and they speak and laugh loudly. Furthermore, I try to endure this situation but I couldn't do that anymore while I have exams and I should sleep well at night to have a fresh mind for studying. Beside that, she never cleans the room as our scheduled program.
To conclude, if it's possible for you , I prefer to occupy in a single-room place to be more accurate on my works. I look forward to you feedback. Your assistance in this matter is really appreciated.
Your Sincerely,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
..., I hope this letter finds you well. my name is Chi Chung. A master student who...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...r colleague to our room which is small. they always are awake until the midnight and...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
...league to our room which is small. they always are awake until the midnight and they speak...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e, I try to endure this situation but I couldnt do that anymore while I have exams and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eans the room as our scheduled program. To conclude, if its possible for you , ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... To conclude, if its possible for you , I prefer to occupy in a single-room pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, really, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65605095541 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61124851577 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713375796178 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4627109504 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9166666667 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0833333333 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271328688831 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812342593599 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075225791839 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181723328825 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670171240268 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.