You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear accommodation Officer,
my name is John engineering student at this college apartment no 13. However, the purpose of this letter is to apprise about the problems incurred in sharing accommodation. Furthermore, my roommate organises late-night parties commences at evening terminates in the morning during a party they play music loudly affect sleep. In addition to this, uses my accessories without my permission and occasionally never return.
Most Importantly, almost all the tenants living in the apartment are fond of music, late-night parties and smokers. therefore, please accept my application for changing my room according to my preferences. preferably, a single room with fewer tenants in the apartment. In addition to this, sleeps early at night or working tenants who don't attend or organise parties. Also, the surroundings of the apartment or room must be quite.
Moreover, my exam commences the second week of next month. therefore, arrangements before the end of this month would be appreciated as this would allow some time for preparation for the exams.
I hope to hear from you soon about my concerns.
Yours Sincerely,
John Moses
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Preferably
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: QUIET_QUITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'quiet'? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'
Suggestion: quiet
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41208791209 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01566273186 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675824175824 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7465317087 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7692307692 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171473360612 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593171764895 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498421798484 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806805917078 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307666854909 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.