You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
Describe the situation
Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is regarding the accommodation arrangement provided in the college room. I would like to briefly explain to you about the issues that I face due to this arrangement. I live with another student named Ramya. The room is quite cozy and accommodating more than one person leads to suffocation of materials that both of us have. Initially, we tried adjusting ourselves thinking that we would get used to it, but after certain point of time, a lot of issues have propped up. From leaving all her stuff unclean here and there to spilling eatables everywhere, the whole room is untidy and a mess. The room, already being small looks like a storeroom with no space to walk into. It’s being so exasperating to work under these suffocating conditions. There’s no room for peaceful and refreshing thoughts anymore. The more peaceful an environment is, the more is the positive good vibes around. Living in such an exhausting room leads to depression of mind. I request you to kindly provide me with a separate room accommodation for the reason stated above.
Yours faithfully,
Krithika.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00534759358 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84172149441 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689839572193 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8683020428 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21063037195 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703128412777 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690805912508 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214027407823 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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