You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
The intend of writing this letter to state my inconvenience with my present college accommodation.
I have first year student of master of commerce. My roll no is 1234. I am living in college hostel, Room no 34 . I sharing the room with one of my batch match, but I was having trouble with living in such a noisy surrounding.
The problem is that my room mate play loud music at night, which me makes unable to sleep properly. Many a times he watch movie late night can keep laughing loudly. As I have to focus of studies, because many assignment and class work has to be completed on daily basis. Moreover, the final exam are also coming near. I have requested him many times but, not seen any change in his behavior. It will cost to score bad in exam which will have detrimental effect on my career ahead.
I request you to shift me to another place. I can leave in any room if the surrounding is peaceful and my roommate is calm and considerate about others
Hope you will understand my situation and provide the positive solution
Yours faithfully
Maninder kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Dear Sir, The intend of writing this letter to state my inco...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... student of master of commerce. My roll no is 1234. I am living in college hostel...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... am living in college hostel, Room no 34 . I sharing the room with one of my batch...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... living in college hostel, Room no 34 . I sharing the room with one of my batch m...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...me makes unable to sleep properly. Many a times he watch movie late night can keep laug...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'watches'.
Suggestion: watches
...able to sleep properly. Many a times he watch movie late night can keep laughing loud...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... As I have to focus of studies, because many assignment and class work has to be...
^^
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assignment seems to be countable; consider using: 'many assignments'.
Suggestion: many assignments
...As I have to focus of studies, because many assignment and class work has to be completed on d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59183673469 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53348824835 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683673469388 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.622808586 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2307692308 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230054825242 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699224874801 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564807744826 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119081752283 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313876957441 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.