You live in a room in a college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation office at the college. In the letter,
Describe the situation
Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While the accommodation itself is fine, my housemate has become intolerable making it almost impossible for me to work. I hope you will consider my situation favorably.
Let me explain my situation. The trouble started about three months ago when my housemate first moved it. Prior to that, everything was fine; my old housemate was extremely considerate. My current housemate, however, stays up almost all night and plays incessantly loud music. As such, I have not been able to sleep properly and therefore cannot concentrate on my studies.
Would you kindly transfer me or my housemate to another room? I would much prefer to live with someone who is quieter and more considerable of others. As long as it is quiet, I don’t mind whom I live with.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully,
Rafsun
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am u...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your consideration Yours faithfully, Rafsun
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, therefore, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98717948718 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87374018363 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711538461538 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2055721317 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.8333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161340996201 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616061559686 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569974581943 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121790906075 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693701313233 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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