Dear Ravi,
Hope you are recovering well from the accident, we all are praying for your fast recovery and are dying to see you fit again. Last Sunday we had a cricket match with red Lions, as you are aware of our rivalry this time we came on top beating them comprehensively.Everybody contributed well though match was a nail bitter and went to the last ball but at the end we were victorious.
Although there were problems right from choosing the team and deciding the order of players as in your absence an all-rounder was a dire need of the moment. The conditions were also not favourable to our team as there was overcast condition which would help bowlers and we were put to bat first. Initially our top order struggled but as bowl got old we were able to play our shots while scoring runs at a good rate in middle overs. we posted a score of 168 runs in 20 overs which seemed difficult for them because of early wickets which were chipped by Mahesh early in the innings and whole team succumb to the pressure.
Playing against them is always a lot of pressure , you would understand well. everyone in team was motivated do well and wanted to win so that we can present our victory to you which will help you in faster recovery. we all missed you in the match, hoping for your return soon.
Get well soon !!!
Regards
Gunjan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d Lions, as you are aware of our rivalry this time we came on top beating them co...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Everybody
...ame on top beating them comprehensively.Everybody contributed well though match was a nai...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ng runs at a good rate in middle overs. we posted a score of 168 runs in 20 overs ...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...against them is always a lot of pressure , you would understand well. everyone in ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everyone
...f pressure , you would understand well. everyone in team was motivated do well and wante...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...which will help you in faster recovery. we all missed you in the match, hoping for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48979591837 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54132363558 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5327184257 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20117087257 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859828381532 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499754390136 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154715634206 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495514499205 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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