Dear Mans,
I was so sorry to hear about your accident. I hope you’re feeling better today and that it’s not too boring in hospital. Please tack care of yourself and tell me if anything is necessary.
The match on Saturday was disappointing. We lost the game and that was probably because you weren’t there to score that extra goal. The worst thing was that we were winning until 10 minutes before the end, when suddenly they scored the penalty goal. I was so shocked when I saw the ball hit the back of the net. The coach is supposed to object the result, because he thinks that referee made mistake.
I think the weather wasn’t accompanied team. We were really wet and the pitch was extremely muddy. To extent that by the end of the game nobody could hardly see the grass and players were sliding the ground in the mud. Every member of the team were exhausted.
Please Let us know when you’re going home and we’ll arrange for someone to bring you to watch the next game. The rest of the team send their regards and we all wish you a speedy recovery.
Best wishes
Shima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ish you a speedy recovery. Best wishes Shima
^^^
Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a speedy recovery. Best wishes Shima
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57788944724 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34653459175 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658291457286 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0654101733 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7333333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2666666667 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53333333333 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152759145247 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502302943797 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498538987656 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101465573 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519327857638 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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