You read an advertisement from local newspaper about a discount sale at a particular shop. However, when you went to buy the goods you wanted, you found the sale had ended.
Write to the newspaper manager,
- Give details of the incidents
- How you felt
- Demand Compensation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express the inconvenience caused because of your newspaper. As I follow your newspaper on a daily basis, I came across a Sale advertisement in BigBazaar, Shalimarbagh, Delhi from 2 January to 10 January 2017. Therefore, I visited this place on 9 January 2017 to buy groceries and a Sony Television.
After picking up groceries and selecting my desired Sony Television model, I was expecting a flat 50% discount on the entire bill. But to my disappointment, this was not the case. The manager at the billing counter told me that there was no sale being conducted by their store and it was a miscommunication spread by your newspaper. I was really shocked and annoyed. He also said that they have encountered several such cases for the past few days. To avoid any insult, I paid for the complete bill, though I did not have the budget to purchase such an expensive television, otherwise.
I strongly hold your newspaper responsible for this incident and demand a compensation doe the television that I have bought. Otherwise, I will have to file an official complaint in the nearby Police Station.
I am looking forward for your positive and prompt response.
Your Sincerely,
Manpreet Walia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asis, I came across a Sale advertisement in BigBazaar, Shalimarbagh, Delhi from 2...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97607655502 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0296792777 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650717703349 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9607981154 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0684668900778 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211931279676 0.0766984524023 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285828273384 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392155214694 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263407135895 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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