You read an article in a magazine recently which might be useful for you and your friend's job. Write a letter to your friend and say -Describe an article and its content, explain why it is good for you, why would it be helpful for your friend?

Dear Jan,

Hope you are doing good. I has been long time since we communicated, well let me explain the reason to write this letter to you. Last week I went to my university library and found a interesting article in the magazine name " Electronic now a days".
The article was related to nano technology and it explain everything about it, like how nano technology works, what are it's score in communication sector.

Writer used simple language, even a layman can understand it. I am pretty sure that it will enhance your knowledge in the field of nano technology, as I remember when we met last time you had discussed about it and explain me in a brief that how this area can improve your job profile. I requested librarian to allow me to take the photocopy of this article, however, she refused to give me the permission as it violate the copyright act, moreover university does not allow students to take any photos or copy from a original book.

Perhaps can buy this magazine via internet or by post. This article on the mentioned magazine in January edition on page 21 and it is written by famous scientist Dr. Shayam.
If need any extra information about it , please feel free to call me, I am always free for you.

Your truly,
Satpreet Singh

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...Dear Jan, Hope you are doing good. I has been long time since we communicated, w...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...went to my university library and found a interesting article in the magazine nam...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'explains'?
Suggestion: explains
...e was related to nano technology and it explain everything about it, like how nano tech...
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Line 6, column 516, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tudents to take any photos or copy from a original book. Perhaps can buy this ...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... If need any extra information about it , please feel free to call me, I am alway...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61205900014 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662222222222 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2898538015 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4545454545 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206149509626 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737087207426 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389259615918 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964794564848 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416080082355 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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