You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
-say where you think you left the papers
-explain why they are so important
-tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Marcus,
I was just an hour ago in Swiss Hotel conference room participating in a meeting about improving the environment in our workplace.
After the meeting, I needed to pick up my children from school. Once I arrived home I realized that I have forgotten my folder with all my work papers on the front table of the lobby. The folder is bright blue with green stripes and there is a sticker with my name ‘’Monica Green’’ on it. Should be easy to recognize.
The folder is very important for me as all my work stays in there including meeting times, deadlines, information about costumers and the roster for employees. Also, there are some important clients and their projects about the future plan which disappearing would result in trouble.
I would more than appreciate if you could keep this folder in a safe place and I will come to pick it up tomorrow morning at 8 am if it is fine with you.
Yours sincerely,
Monica Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Marcus, I was just an hour ago in Swiss Hotel co...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ded to pick up my children from school. Once I arrived home I realized that I have f...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8869047619 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93376910028 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0341956383 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126741861118 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418979414616 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567768205718 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774690783206 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685495941276 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.