You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say
– Thank them for supporting you.
– Describe how you spend your time.
– Explain about your recovery process.
Hi colleagues,
I became really glad and excited when I received your cards and presents. It means a lot to me to have such a supportive and kind colleagues. I cannot wait to see you again.
However, as you know I have to spend the next couple weeks at the bed and give my leg rest as it has been broken badly in a car accident. I’m reading some astonishing articles about the current trend in industry and manufacturing which I couldn’t find enough time when I was working. In the meantime, I spend more time with my family and I can talk more with my nice and beautiful girl.
Nevertheless, I’m getting better and I had a visit to my doctor yesterday and he told me that I’ll be able to come back to work soon.
See you soon, guys.
Kind regards,
Sorena.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59027777778 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66565374281 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673611111111 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2860950763 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4444444444 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179259699314 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697360902938 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549986345075 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102862647057 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066618754837 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.