You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it.

Dear Dave,
I am writing to complain about the water leakage in kitchen washing area which has occurred many times even after multiple repairings.

It started last week when my maid was cleaning the kitchen wash area and mistakenly broke the pipe beneath wash basin. I am not sure though how she can break it as the pipe is hard enough to bear any stress.

Initially, it was only a few drops but now the intensity of its flow has increased. As a result, making the floor wet and slippery. Moreover, the leaked water gets stored in the corner, Consequently, it starts stinking until removed manually. I also called a plumber to have this problem resolved but he suggested a new pipe instead of fixing the old one

It would be very helpful if you could send a more experienced plumber. However, if you think that is more time taking then could you please allow me to buy a new pipe so that this problem can be fixed permanently. Also, I request you to compensate the cost of it from next month's rent.

I hope to hear a solution from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
siara

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 119, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
..., if you think that is more time taking then could you please allow me to buy a new ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55384615385 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4282687561 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6160609059 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175881456493 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536179360527 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429784467467 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739013777365 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429847127631 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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