Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to let you know that my words are not enough to thank you for finding me my driving license. I am a full time driver in a private company and this is not just an identity but a bread and butter for myself. I could have lose my job, if this license was not found for an another week.
Can I please ask where did you find my license? I last remember to have it in pocket when I was at a gas station at North Park Road but when I finished my job I came accross that I have lost my license somewhere.
I am very grateful to you for sending me my lost license, you have not only save my job but also gave me a hope that humanity is still alive in this world. I want to invite on a dinner as a gesture of thanks for your kindness and good deed.
I can't wait to meet you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Yasir Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... finding me my driving license. I am a full time driver in a private company and this is...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tity but a bread and butter for myself. I could have lose my job, if this license...
^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lost'.
Suggestion: lost
...ead and butter for myself. I could have lose my job, if this license was not found f...
^^^^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a week' or 'another week'.
Suggestion: a week; another week
... job, if this license was not found for an another week. Can I please ask where did you find m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... humanity is still alive in this world. I want to invite on a dinner as a gesture...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hanks for your kindness and good deed. I cant wait to meet you soon. Yours fa...
^
Line 6, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nks for your kindness and good deed. I cant wait to meet you soon. Yours faithfu...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.89595375723 4.54256449028 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05603288119 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6250456219 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136145526838 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651114896246 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530657128566 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934305200298 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277131256426 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.34 8.71597938144 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.