You recently met a couple who will be visiting your town. Write a letter to them and say
– Suggest what to bring
– Recommend where they should stay
– What places they should visit
Hi Ana,
I enjoyed your company while staying in Ottawa, and it is a pleasure to know that you will be visiting New Delhi next week. I plan to spend some quality time with you. Since you have never been to India, let me give you a few suggestions so that you are better prepared for your trip.
New Delhi is witnessing the hottest summer of the decade. I recommend you to carry cotton and linen clothes only and a few bottles of Gatorade before you reach your hotel. If you lose energy or salt or water from your body due to the extreme heat, you may end up in a hospital. Gatorade will keep you hydrated and energised.
In New Delhi, I will recommend staying at the Maurya Sheraton because it is a perfect mixture of modern amenities with the traditional culture of India. The Sheraton’s food is really exquisite, and its service is rated top among all five-star hotels in India.
Your one-week stay in India is unfortunately too short to explore the capital. New Delhi is a culturally, historically, geographically and aesthetically rich place. You must visit the Qutub Minar, The Aravalli hills, Jama Masjid and the Red Fort to get a taste of this city. I am sure you will return to explore the city again.
Looking forward to seeing you soon,
raj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will return to explore the city again. Looking forward to seeing you soon, r...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61674008811 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60524924777 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643171806167 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9922002971 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8571428571 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184163428623 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617291946172 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409371305909 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970504666382 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499180807685 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.