Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I would like to apply for a part-time job as a Relationship Manager at your local restaurant. First of all, I got to know about this wonderful opportunity from one of my friend's who work as a full-time chef in your restaurant.
Secondly, I have worked in the past at some of the big giant companies like KFC and McDonald's as a Relationship Manager. I used to handle customer's queries and complaints and on top of that I gave a one-time weekly presentation on number of cases resolved in a week to team management. In addition to this, I was also responsible for providing insights on ROI on the investment made by the owner.
Thirdly, I would be grateful to you if you can allow me to work from Monday to Friday between 9 am to 5 pm excluding public holidays.
I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Your's Faithfully,
FaizalReza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... Secondly, I have worked in the past at some of the big giant companies like KFC and McDona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, you know, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 662.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50340136054 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85905345901 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8397431775 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 4.34317383033 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255556230363 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103075316279 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923851471357 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130764548584 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062555399935 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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