Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing about the review I got from my colleagues about their experience at the whole-day meeting held at your hotel and suites on 15th of August, 2019.
Let me give you more insight into what was gathered from their responses on the questionnaires. All the attendees seems to love the ambience environment and the fact that it was spotlessly cleaned. In addition, they were also intrigued by the quick and spontaneous responses to their orders.
But, I must confess, they were really disappointed about the shabby presentation of the meals. There was no form of creativity in the meals presentation and a host of others complained about the hardness of the beef in the main course. The meat was not properly cooked and some even noticed traces of blood in the meat when it was sliced. And I personally had issues with the vegetables, it was soggy and did not taste fresh at all.
To prevent future occurrence of such issues, I am suggesting that you employ seasoned chefs with wealth of experience. They should have intercontinental culinary skills at par with their contemporaries, this should include presentation knowledge.
We hope to see a better changes and an awesome experience on our next visit.
Yours faithfully,
Wunmi Bajo.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about the review I got from...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2019'.
Suggestion: August 2019
...eld at your hotel and suites on 15th of August, 2019. Let me give you more insight into w...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'meals'' or 'meal's'?
Suggestion: meals'; meal's
... There was no form of creativity in the meals presentation and a host of others compl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91654677434 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654205607477 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3999152131 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242708978722 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714053411513 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447921605279 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11041853468 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602091868805 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.