Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to apprise you about an error in "Know the unknown" column in the 1st April 2018 print of your newspaper: The Times Of India. In that article, you mentioned about Doctors across India who have revolutionized the treatment of Diabetes by contributing in the field of Medicine.
Under the heading of 7th Rank, you mentioned Dr Arun Kumar and his contribution of formulating a new combination of the drug for the treatment of Diabetes in the year 2002. However, it was in the year 2007 that his approach was accepted by the Indian Medical Association. Also, Since he is a close friend of mine, and I have in fact worked with him before, I am aware that he is still practising medicine since 35 years and not 5 years unlike mentioned in your article. If I am right, he said, he plans to retire after the next 5 years because of his health issues.
I hope you will do the amendments and reprint the article with correct information in your upcoming week's health page. I am a devoted reader and will wait for the next article.
Thanking you,
Anjum
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65816326531 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7146453268 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.633278965 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18637953503 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079568253265 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772949532845 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128400602436 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904345498752 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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