Dear Joba,
How are you? I hope you are well. I received your letter last Friday. You are willing to getting advice from me about you should go college for study or to trying to get job.
First of all, I am really glade to be a person, whom you choose for getting suggestion about the most important decision of your life. From my opinion you should try to get a job instead of going college. Because, after the sudden death of your father it will be difficult for your mother to maintain the cost of your study. Another side you have younger sister. They are still school going. So, I think you are only one who should support your family not only financially but also mentally. So, if you get a job then you will be able to stand beside your family.
Now, maybe you will think what about study. Don't worry if you get a par-time job than you will get time and money to join college. As I know you are interested to spend time with kids and very much suitable for handling them. In that case trying to get a par-time job in a nursery will be appropriate for you.
Before finishing the letter, I like to say best of luck for your life.
I am looking forward to hearing from you at earliest.
Best regards,
Pianka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'schooled'.
Suggestion: schooled
...you have younger sister. They are still school going. So, I think you are only one who...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...not only financially but also mentally. So, if you get a job then you will be able to ...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
... maybe you will think what about study. Dont worry if you get a par-time job than yo...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to hearing from you at earliest. Best regards, Pianka
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, so, still, then, well, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35930735931 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11338781364 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0883474533 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.9444444444 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473193508659 0.216113520407 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160544666192 0.0766984524023 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148849397704 0.0603063233224 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273813188765 0.12726935374 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180780254105 0.0580467560999 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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