Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is James Wasrin and I booked a trip with your airline last week on 12th of September from Sydney to Tehran. When I got on the plane I clearly remember that I was carrying a luggage because we had a ruff time fitting the package in the locker and also I even remember asking one of the crews on board for an aid with the situation. However, when I was taking off, an old passenger sitting beside me asked for a hand with her package and I totally forgot about my own luggage. Thus far, I did not notice the loss of my luggage until I arrived home.
It was a medium size white hand luggage and it had a scratch on the right side of its top shield. There was also a tag on the upper side of the luggage stating my full name and my passport number so it would be easy to recognize by your crew.
Since the luggage contained some of my identifications and precious documents like my driving license, I would be delighted if you checked the list of foundings from that flight and inform me in case of any matches.your assisstance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
James Wasrin,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... I totally forgot about my own luggage. Thus far, I did not notice the loss of my lu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36966824645 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50854651986 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620853080569 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4162231479 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198286656994 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793034300736 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244888529528 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115460314473 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152742063071 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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