Dear Mr Walker,
I am Chris Wong who is a part-time computer operator. I have been enjoying my work but some issues have been raised that need your interference to resolve and hoping for your intercession to solve them.
I joined the company for the last four weeks and gained experience where supporting my university tuition were my reason to take a job. My job contract was to work for three days ad week from 2:00 to 6:00 pm. However, I have been working from 2:00 to 10:00 pm for the last couple of days because the person who is supposed to come at 7:30 pm sharp does up show up until 10 pm.
In addition, my supervisor forces me to work on Fridays, which contradict my class schedule. I hope you would understand the issue and really appreciate it if you could talk to our supervisor about these problems.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...for your intercession to solve them. I joined the company for the last four we...
^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Chris Wong
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60355029586 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56282019215 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674556213018 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1124711981 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205802017133 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876685607981 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05936627748 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126034876382 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045486487291 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.