You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it.
Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Explain what went wrong with the car you rented
• Ask for some form of compensation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the bad service I have received from your company.
I have rented an economy class vehicle from your company for 4 days, from 21st to 24th of June and I paid the money in cash.
After just 2 days of driving the car I realized that there have been a few problems with it including a flat tire, broken engine and an empty fuel tank. Firstly, I have been driving 3 kilometers that I understood the tire was flat and it had to be changed. Secondly, It was one of the main parts of the contract that mentioned the tank should be full and the car could be driven for 30 km, but to my surprise it was half full and I paid $1500 for fuel. Finally, in the second day of driving the car I could hear some exotic sounds from the engine and consequently it has broken down in the middle of my way to Sydney which caused me a lot of inconveniences.
I would like you to refund all the money that was paid for this rental car as well as providing a new car which would be in standard condition; otherwise, I would be entitled to pass the issue to the syndicate or court in order to ask for compensation.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27659574468 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39493958733 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7515213814 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 4.34317383033 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167269139833 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621318730526 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406204336541 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832088811337 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407237105747 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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